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12390 No. 12390 ID: fb5d8e

>BEGIN CHAPTER 23
>"THE LOVERS, REVERSED."




>Find previous chapters and volumes in /questarch/
>Textdiscussion in /questdis/
>Fanfiction in /txt/ and fanart in /quest/
>Join us on IRC as me and Weaver make out: Rizon, #rubyquest
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No. 12897 ID: 64f108

>>12891
what, No accent?

tell her the predicament and such, hopefully to combine your efforts to escape.
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No. 12899 ID: 2dd482

>>12893
shut up. We've got enough fucking trouble with Raital. And Cheryl. And Kurha.
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No. 12900 ID: 670155

"I've come seeking aid against the skullking. I also came to check on you on behalf of your son and granddaughter rapier and dagger, very nice people."
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No. 12902 ID: c2dffe

>>12891
It's been thirteen years since Calavera trapped you here. During that time your children allied with the Skullking. I came here to persuade them to end that alliance and instead help us fight her.

Prince Darkmoon Rapier told me you would've disapproved of the alliance, and that you disappeared when you went to see the oracle, so we decided to arrange an expedition to attempt to free you. Sadly the guide was actually Calavera and i became trapped too.
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No. 12903 ID: bffa2a

>>12891

"I am here with Darmoon Dagger to form alliance against the skullking. You have been gone for thirteen years but I came to find you in hopes that you could once again unite your people or bring closure to your dissapearance. But alas, now I may be trapped here with you by Calavera."
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No. 12904 ID: 72ee5e

>>12891
"Well. Rescuing you. Your peole need your unifying rule. And I need you to help me in my quest to free the world from the clutches of the nefarious skullking."
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No. 12905 ID: fb5d8e
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12905

"Well.. I was hoping maybe I could get you the hell out of here and we could go save your people from the Lich Calavera who wants to lead them to ruin."
, Mudy answers.

The Queen Empress closes her eyes again.
>"Are my children carrying the responsibilities I entrusted them with?"
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No. 12906 ID: bd2eec

>>12891
"My lady, my reasons for coming to your country, originally, was to seek aid against the Skullking and her forces and to return Princess Darkmoon Dagger to her homeland. In your 13-year absence, Firewater and her people have become allies of the Skullking and, from what I was told, everything has become a bit of a mess. I had convinced Prince Darkmoon Rapier, your son and second heir, to go against the Skullking in light of recent events. But before I had the chance to speak with the rest of the Royal Council, made up of your children, I was tricked by a lich, who had a grudge against me, named Calavera into entering here. He locked me in here as he did you, your highness."
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No. 12907 ID: 64f108

>>12905
yer kidding right? they are all arguing and stuff.

heads up on the image numbers btw reaver
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No. 12908 ID: c2dffe

>>12905
The five of them rule the dark elves as a council, though they seem to disagree quite often.
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No. 12909 ID: 96945d

They're trying, but we should mention that without a leader over them all, they are divided, and have resorted to allying with the Skullking.
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No. 12910 ID: 13034c

"They are, but without a single leader, I fear they lack the decisiveness necessary to prosper in the difficult times ahead. Your nation needs unity."
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No. 12911 ID: 670155

>>12905

"Ah, so its like that...My apologies, but at the very least I can honestly say that they are trying."
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No. 12912 ID: f44349

>>12905
"They are trying, but they are scattered and confused without your leadership.
They need you now, if only to remind them to work together."
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No. 12914 ID: bffa2a

>>12905

"Only their specific fields. There is no unifying force. You should survey the situation yourself but it does not look good. At least come see Darkmoon Dagger's wedding. She and the prince would like that."
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No. 12915 ID: fb5d8e
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12915

>"In your 13-year absence, Firewater and her people have become allies of the Skullking and, from what I was told, everything has become a bit of a mess."
, Mudy replies.
>"They are trying, but they are scattered and confused without your leadership. They need you now, if only to remind them to work together."

The matriach nods once. She takes her time before responding again.
>"Prince Mudy Latral,"
, she finally says.
>"In your royal wisdom, do you have any insight as to why my children seem to be failing at what I taught them to do in my absence?"
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No. 12916 ID: 82167e

>>12915
They are all masters of their own domains, but there is no common focus for them to hang together with.
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No. 12917 ID: ed469a

>>12915
Perhaps it is within their nature to compete against one another.
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No. 12918 ID: 2abfb1

>>12915
"It appears that they have been holding back because they are convinced that you will return to lead them. Or at least, that is the excuse they are hiding behind."
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No. 12920 ID: f44349

>>12915
"...They've been so focused on WHAT they were doing that they forgot WHY they were doing it..."
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No. 12921 ID: 670155

Well if Mudy has some experience anywhere its with siblings that dont get along.
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No. 12922 ID: 96945d

>>12916
>>12918
I like these. Also, you should mention from experience that battling the wills of your siblings are.. hard, to say the least, and some things can win out over others.
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No. 12925 ID: bffa2a

>>12915

There is no unifying body to make the final decision on matters. The land needs a queen.
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No. 12926 ID: c2dffe

>>12915
Each of them holds something different as the most important, and being convinced that they're right, they can't agree very often.
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No. 12927 ID: 6164e0

>>12915
'perhaps they became too used to relying on your guidance. I could understand forcing them to learn how to govern on their own, but in such a time when the fate of your empire quite literally hangs on the decisions made by them, I would recommend going back to them, to show them one more time what a ruler must do, what is necessary for the strength and unity of your people. I fear without such an example, they shall wallow in uncertainty while your empire crumbles. So, will you come with me, to help teach your children a final lesson on how to rule?'
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No. 12931 ID: fb5d8e
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12931

Mudy considers for a moment.
>"They are all masters of their own domains, but there is no common focus for them to hang together with."
, he answer.
>"It.. appears that they have been holding back because they are convinced that you will return to lead them. Or at least, that is the excuse they are hiding behind."

The Queen Empress opens her eyes again. Mudy feels like her eyes, laden with experience, can see straight through his soul.
>"You speak with wisdom far beyond your years, Prince Mudy Latral. I am forced to agree with you."
, she responds.
>"I am old. Very old. Like the Oracle above me my time will be coming soon as well, and I have decided to meditate about the experiences and decisions I have made during the million years that I have lived before I move on to the next world.
>It is time for my children to learn how to stand on their own feet and look to themselves for strength. Prince Mudy Latral, do you think you will be able to tell them this for me?"
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No. 12932 ID: 96945d

Be sure to have something as proof of your meeting, so you don't look like a Blutjager that killed the oracle and their mother. >_>
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No. 12933 ID: f44349

>>12931
I do not know if they will listen, but I will tell them.
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No. 12934 ID: 82167e

>>12931
It would be the greatest of honors.
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No. 12935 ID: c2dffe

>>12931
Of course Queen Empress, assumming i manage to get out. How would i make sure they believe me though?
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No. 12936 ID: 2abfb1

>>12931
"I can find the words, but what would give me legitimacy? Perhaps you have a token, artifact, or some other effect, that would let them recognize that a mere 'bold speaks for you."
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No. 12937 ID: bde1b8

>>12931
"I would be honored, empress."
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No. 12938 ID: bffa2a

>>12931

"I will honor your last wish and will try my utmost to impart this knowledge to them. But, I am afraid I will have to find my way out or I too shall spend my last moments here."
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No. 12940 ID: 0d7f43

>>12931

Will you not visit your children one last time?
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No. 12942 ID: 8ce2bf

We must tell them we found her dead body.
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No. 12944 ID: fb5d8e
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12944

>"I will honor your last wish and will try my utmost to impart this knowledge to them."
, Mudy agrees with no hesitation.
>"..But.. what would give me legitimacy? Perhaps you have a token, artifact, or some other effect, that would let them recognize that a mere 'bold speaks for you. And I am afraid I will have to find my way out or I too shall spend my last moments here."

The woman takes her time to contemplate again.
She slowly brings her hands to her head and removes her diadem. Its gems sparkles in the moonlight.
>"Show them this and they will know it is their mother's wish. Then, when you have succeeded, you must take an even greater responsibility."
, she says.
>"Give this to the one who you see fit to become the main ruler. Weigh your choice carefully."

She pauses as Mudy takes the royal headpiece with shaking hands.

>"The exit is behind you."
, she continues.
>"May the dark moon smile upon you, Prince Mudy Latral."
The queen crosses her arms and closes her eyes again.
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No. 12946 ID: f42c4e

>>12944
Well let's leave then.
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No. 12947 ID: bffa2a

>>12944

".. It is?" Turn around and let's see.
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No. 12948 ID: fb5d8e
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12948

>"..It is..?"
Mudy steps back from the alcove. He feels a slight breeze stroke against his back.
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No. 12949 ID: c2dffe

>>12944
"I'll do my best to ensure your people get the most worthy ruler. Farewell Queen Empress Darkmoon Arrow."

Then bow and go towards the door.
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No. 12950 ID: 971a23

>>12948
Take the sword sticking out of the pile (gotta loot SOMETHING) and get out of there.
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No. 12952 ID: fb5d8e
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12952

>"I'll do my best to ensure your people get the most worthy ruler. Farewell Queen Empress Darkmoon Arrow."
Mudy takes a deep bow.
He silent grabs the sword from the pile and makes his escape through the corridor, leaving the Queen Empress to live out her days in peace.
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No. 12955 ID: ed469a

Oh yeah, back to form.
We're turning out quite the Light Warrior aren't we?
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No. 12956 ID: bde1b8

>>12952
Proceed to MEETING ROOM. Assuming this tunnel lets out somewhere where we are not hopelessly lost.
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No. 12958 ID: 971a23

>>12952
Now be very careful with your next step, Mudy. It is not unlikely that during your next action you will BE KILL BY DEMONS.
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No. 12959 ID: 2abfb1

Time to line up the ruling family for interviews, carefully weigh our decision, and then--

ah, who am I kidding, we're gonna pick Darkmoon.
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No. 12960 ID: 45afb1

I wonder if Calavera knew about all this? hmm...
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No. 12961 ID: c2ebfb

>>12959
> Darkmoon
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No. 12962 ID: 631bad

>>12959
But we'll have to leave her in the city then.
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No. 12963 ID: bffa2a

>>12959

Most likely, unless she shows incompetence on same level. Unfortunately we will have to leave our heavy hitters behind then.
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No. 12964 ID: 04babe

>>12959

I presume you mean Dagger, seeing as all of them are named "Darkmoon".
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No. 12965 ID: fb5d8e
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12965

Mudy travels through a long narrow corridor. He notices it moves upwards, sometimes having quite a steep slope.
As he gets higher the stone becomes dryer and warmer.

Finally he is confronted with the blinding bright sky and blistering heat of the desert.


>End of chapter 23
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No. 12966 ID: c2dffe

As much as i like Darkmoon Dagger it might be best to choose one of the current heirs, i bet there'd be civil war otherwise. Besides she's hardly fit for rule just yet i'd say.

If we can it might be best to get to know them before they know about the crown though, but it might be hard to hide.
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No. 12968 ID: f44349

>>12965
>mailto:SATANSATANSATAN
Just couldn't resist throwing in a reference could you. :3
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No. 12969 ID: f42c4e

>>12966
What was her brother called? The one we met?

He seemed like a pretty cool dude. I nominate him.
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No. 12970 ID: 72ee5e

>>12966
How about Daddy Darkmoon?
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No. 12971 ID: 45afb1

First off I would like to vote for Darkmoon Rapier, he seems the kind of person who could really handle a job like this. And I have no doubt in his abilities as a leader, and I think Darkmoon Dagger will agree.

Secondly, this is the longest chapter yet (image wise). I just thought that was worth mentioning.
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No. 12972 ID: 6164e0

>>12965
That...that looks like a sandworm's mouth we just exited out of.
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No. 12974 ID: 39baee

Guys, Stiletto is clearly the best choice for new ruler.
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No. 12975 ID: 9e9c3c

>>12966
Hard to hide? I wouldn't think so since the nobody knows we went down the hole to begin with. Well, nobody except the ol' bonehead, but he doesn't count.
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No. 12976 ID: c2dffe

>>12969
That was her father. I don't know what his obsession is, we should find out, but so far he seemed reasonable.
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No. 12979 ID: 9a71e2

>>12971
>>12970
On the other hand, it's entirely possible that he's Calavera in disguise, and tying up the country with succession wars works just as well as anything else.
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No. 12980 ID: bffa2a

I would actually like choosing Dagger. While leaving behind companions is always sad it seems the right thing to do. Smaller team with less earth shatter also makes for a better story as danger increases. No need to make up so many ways to seperate everyone with less people.
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No. 12981 ID: c2dffe

>>12975
Well we're running around half naked with a diadem that's bigger than our waist and we seem to be outside the city. Now for elves 13 years isn't much, so the odds of somebody noticing that it's the queen's crown seem high.
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No. 12982 ID: 9e9c3c

>>12981
So...dig a hole and bury it until needed. Simple.
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No. 12983 ID: f44349

>>12971
I agree.
Rapier also seems the most prudent choice for... slightly more self-serving reasons. (IE He will definitely help us against the Skullking.)
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No. 12984 ID: 9e9c3c

>>12983
Unless I missed it, it occurs that we still haven't seen Rapier's face. Also the odd Vader-style breathing that apparently comes and goes instead of being a constant. Might want to at least get a good look at him and assess the guy a bit further before committing.
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No. 12987 ID: 0dc731

>>12981
>bigger than our waist
Wear it as a belt then. Under the gown thing we modified our outfit into, of course.
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No. 12988 ID: fb5d8e
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12988

Since it won't ruin the story, have the powerchart of the Darkmoon royal family.
Hopefully it'll give you something to look forward to!

Thanks for enjoying, everyone.
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No. 12989 ID: f42c4e

>>12988
Looks like a choice between Halberd or Rapier to me.

Rapier we know will side against the Skullking... but he hides his face. Suspicious.
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No. 12991 ID: bde1b8

>>12988
Finally! Darkmoon Katana! Someone Mudy could beat in a fight!
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No. 12995 ID: c2dffe

Well fuck. It'd have been nice to have the Queen to fight the Skullking...
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No. 12999 ID: bffa2a

>>12988

Woah Queen, you work out... I like that.
Dagger still gets my vote.
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No. 13001 ID: c2dffe

Regardless of who becomes the ruler i think we should be able to convince Halberd. Improved relations with the elves would mean more trade, same for ending piracy in the sea.

I would guess Katana isn't too happy with the skullking either, and we already know Bolt isn't, though her racism would be a bit of a problem.
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No. 13048 ID: 6164e0

>>12988
...Jesus, the Empress is strong.
We really should ask about that. I mean, all her children and their children and whatnot are a great deal weaker than her. Is it just that she was already crazy old and experienced when she had them, or have they been sheltered too much, or was she just born better than most Dark Elves could ever hope to be?
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No. 13053 ID: 6164e0

Hey, just a thought, but if we choose Rapier, we need to see his face.

One, because a common trope of stories is for the veiled guy to be an enemy in disguise.

Two, because he could more specifically be Calavera.

Just having Calavera in Firewater just makes for a whole bunch of problems, and this is one of them.
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No. 13054 ID: 55e935

Rapier...

Calavera...

hmmm...
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No. 13055 ID: 45afb1

>>13054
Even if he is Calavera, I think I would still vote for him, because one, Calavera is a bad ass, and two, I think he would still try to help us take down the Skullking. He may not like us all that much, but he knows more then we do...
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No. 13061 ID: 13034c

>>12999
Dagger is a pisspoor choice in the long run. She's friends with us, but she doesn't really have any particular virtues as a leader; she is a grandchild of the empress, rather than the direct leader. It will be immediately evident that we picked her merely to have influence over the government.

Right now, the best choice is Rapier. He agrees with our politics is most closely related to a good friend of ours, and is likely to be a good leader to the nation. On the other hand, it seems to me that it's poor foresight to choose someone for such a long-lived race based on such immediate concerns. In particular, the fact that he's listed as "expansionist" seems to bode poorly.

Stiletto has been largely discounted due to being a partier, but with such varied and competent second-in-commands a loose hand may well be the type of rule that the nation will do best under. If he has the mettle to unify the siblings in times when unity is necessary, then he is arguably the best choice in the long run. Considering our own interests, he is unlikely to be interested in unprovoked military action in the future, and at this particular point in time, he's liable to let Rapier handle the Skullking issue, if we encourage him to do so. Regardless, we'll need to talk with him before making a decision.

If we wanted to strike a balance, for the future of the nation, Halberd would be a good choice. It seems to me, however, that she's inferior to both Stiletto and Rapier, both in how her ruling style will effect politics, and in respect to our own self-interest.
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No. 13062 ID: d5b2d6

Halberd!
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No. 13063 ID: 5e64a9

Perhaps we should try talking to each of the prospective rulers and ask what they would have their country do, if it were solely their decision.
Then weigh our decision of the crown based on that.

But don't tell them we have the crown, or they may tailor their answers.
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No. 13064 ID: 13034c

>>13061
Bolt and Katana suck both long- and short-term, and aren't really aligned with us politically. Bolt sucks due to being racist and shit, she's liable to not work together with us now, and liable to start shit in the future. Katana is a pacifist, he's liable to be reluctant to defend his people both now and in the future.
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No. 13065 ID: 13034c

>>13063
There liable to tailor there answers no matter what, if we just ask outright. We're Blutjagers, remember? We'd have to ask leading questions and base our decision on what they say then.
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No. 13066 ID: 62ec90

That queen could fucking kill anyone.
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No. 13067 ID: 670155

'could try promoting one with the promise of reinstating the council after the immediate danger has passed...

or maybe..just maybe, force them through a gauntlet to each prove their own worthiness.
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No. 13068 ID: 9a71e2

I propose this as a course of action:
We claim to have found the Queen, she's busy fighting something or other (May need to get some help with this story) and wants things to run smoothly in her absence with regular council meetings.
Ask a great boon to sit in on these meetings (Not all of them, of course. Maybe ask Dagger if she can get us in without anyone else knowing; She'd probably change the least from our presence or lack of it.)
See if the tiara has anything to say (Glowing, flying, asploding) during the meetings, and listen to the politics.
Make a decision after a week or so and hope to fuck a pissed Stormprague or the other blutjaegers don't show up.
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No. 13070 ID: 9a71e2

>>13068
Forgot to mention: Keep the tiara out of sight from everyone.
Might be a problem if the heirs can smell magic or whatever.
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No. 13082 ID: 0d7f43

>>12988
>>13061
How can we make a decision when we still don't even know their starting techs?
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No. 13084 ID: 13034c

>>13082
your post makes no sense to me.
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No. 13139 ID: 408036

First, we go and see Raital. Before we throw the meeting together, we give her the best sex we in our power- this time, be determined to be on top. It will be important to sate her for the meeting.
Mudy has to start jogging or something to build stamina.
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No. 13142 ID: 408036

>>13139
Just tell us to lie down and let us put our silver tongue to work. Be adamant about it. Tell her that you don't feel as if you are being active enough in bed, not that you dislike taking the lead, but you feel this is important. I know all of the sex scenes simply fade out, but what happens during might be directly related to how Raital will perceive it after. She can't simply take what she wants when it can only be given.
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No. 13151 ID: f42c4e

>>13142
>>13139
After that maybe we can finally tell her that if we say no she has to stop touching us or demanding sex from us? I mean it's true that she wouldn't know that with the lack of social skills she never learned but we really have to teach her it soon. We can't be leading armies to battle while our girlfriend is trying to pin us down and have sex with us.
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No. 13160 ID: 6164e0

>>13139
So you suggest getting Mudy fitter, not for combat purposes, but to better sex his sister?
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No. 13166 ID: 04babe

>>13160

Not like he'd much use in combat anyway. Unless he suddenly develops his powers I doubt any amount of physical training is going to help him win a fight. Hell, even Hans and Gunther can beat down Mudy and they haven't done a single thing aside from cockblock, stare at a ceiling, and proclaim their love of apples. Oh, and occasionally fetching other party members.
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No. 13170 ID: bde1b8

Testing.
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No. 13171 ID: 93c708

>>13170

VICTORY
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No. 13174 ID: 72ee5e

>>12988
Hmm... I HAVE THE SOLUTION!

We put Darkmoon Stilleto in charge. Rapier can be in charge of the military, Halberd in charge of trade, Katana can be the religious advisor to Stilleto and Bolt can like... Not be an FTARD!
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No. 13177 ID: 670155

>>13174

Well thats essentially whats happening. They're just not working together.
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No. 13186 ID: 13034c

>>13177
but with Stilletto in charge, they can get unified when necessary, because someone is there to say, "OK, we do this."

...at least, that's the idea. Stiletto has to be up to it.
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No. 13193 ID: 670155

>>13177
Though each of them has an angle we can work to gain their trust and cooperation


though stilletto and bolt are going to be hardmode.
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