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109181 No. 109181 ID: cc08c7

In which we talk about a bird dealing with inordinate amounts of stress and mind warping horrors.

Critique and tips appreciated.
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No. 145419 ID: ef851f
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145419

First of all, congratulations on your return to creating quests. Also, as a token of my thanks for following my weird story, I made something for you. I hope you will like it.
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No. 145420 ID: fe0bf7

>>145419
That outfit is pretty sick and works with her so well!
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No. 145425 ID: 400dcc

>>145419
Yooo thanks so much dude, I love it! It'll finally give her a little more variety in her wardrobe.
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No. 145426 ID: 5a98bf

>>145425

Hello, no need for you to draw her in that costume. When I saw her, she looked like a previous goth girl or somebody who would become one, and that is what the drawing depicted. I also have to ask, do you use the Discord that Questden has?
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No. 145434 ID: 2028c2
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145434

>>145426
Not only did I draw her in the dress, to the best of my ability, I decided to throw someone else in too, also to the best of my ability. I wasn't sure if you had an official colour scheme for her or not though so I made her black and white like the Quest.

I wasn't aware there was a Discord for Quest authors tbh, I'd have to think on if I want to join or not though. I'm honestly kinda shy about joining Discord groups.
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No. 145435 ID: d1dbca

>>145434
First of all, this looks fantastic. Rope Bunny has never looked better. If you want, just tell me what you'd like me to draw, and I'll do it. As for Discord, I primarily use it to look at the art of others and to talk with other quest authors. But I get it if itsn't for you.
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No. 145438 ID: 187b04

>>145435
I'm really glad you like it! If you really want to, maybe a follow-up picture with a bunny enforcer of your choice playing with Charlotte?

I'll consider the Discord thing, maybe once I get more of my Quest moving I'd feel more comfortable with it. Thanks for the offer though!
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No. 145439 ID: c9178d

>>145438
How much do you want it to go in a spicy direction, from 1 to 10?
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No. 145440 ID: c9178d

>>145438
Right now, we are having a watch party on Discord. Nalthar hosts them all the time.
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No. 145441 ID: 187b04

>>145439
You go as spicy as you want dude!
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No. 145442 ID: 2c88b9

>>145441

Be careful what you wish for...Just kidding. I will make a short narrative around it.
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No. 145444 ID: 2c88b9
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Rope Bunny brings in the strange bird to the rest of the enforcers, and they start discussing.

Lady Buttania: "Who is she? She looks strange."

Burrow Buster: "Not to mention that she looks fat."

Lady Buttania: "Don't be rude, she is not fat, she is just plump like a fresh fruit."

Rope Bunny: "I don't know who she is or where she came from. So I decided to bring her here."

Wax Porenetic: "Well, let me find out."
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No. 145445 ID: 2c88b9
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Wax Porenetic: "Are you seeking us out to feel something you never felt before. We can all make you feel different things, all you need to do is just ask, and we will make your wildest dream a reality."
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No. 145446 ID: 2c88b9
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145446

Lady Buttania: "Or maybe she is an offering to us from a tribe that wants to make contact with us. I mean, just look at her butt, it is so impressive that it even gives Pound Cake a run for her money."

When Lady Buttania touches the ass of the bird, she makes a strange sound.
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No. 145447 ID: 2c88b9
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Whipsalot: "Ladies, ladies, give our new visitor some breathing room and keep your hands to yourself. It is a lot for her to take in all at once, and we do not wish to intimidate her. First things first, Rope Bunny, remove her bindings if she wants them back, you will tie her up even better."
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No. 145448 ID: 2c88b9
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Whipsalot: "Listen, whoever you are, we can give you a fun experience, and you can experience all of this like a pleasant dream. But if you want to experience playing with us, you will have to remove all your clothes and climb onto the bed in this room."
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No. 145449 ID: 2c88b9
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145449

The bird does what she was instructed to do, but there was still some hesitation in her actions, and then she gets to the bed, still not sure where all of this is going.

Whipsalot: "Excellent, now girls surround her and leave a space next to her for me. Let's make her feel comfortable."
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No. 145450 ID: 2c88b9
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145450

All the bunnies surround the bird on the bed.

Whipsalot: "So if you want to play with any of us, just say it, and any one of us will try to accommodate your taste. So who interests you the most?"

Rope Bunny: "........Do you want to be tied up?"

Burrow Buster: "She is not going to pick anybody. She is just going to remain silent."

Lady Buttania: "I have to apologize for my previous actions. But I would like to explore your body, it will be a shocking experience for both of us."

Wax Porenetic: "She is going to pick me, I can see it in her eyes. The burning passion, the heat, and the release. She wants what I can give her."

Pound Cake: "I can give you a really passionate hug."



This was a brief interaction I decided to create between our characters because I couldn't decide who to pick. If you want more interaction, just pick which bunny you want to play with, and write her name. Or if you prefer, this is when the interaction will end.
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No. 145451 ID: 5f8cc4
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145451

>>145450
This whole thing was awesome dude, thank you! Despite being overwhelmed and confused Chsrlotte consults the deepest recesses of her mind to make a decision...and by that I mean I couldn't decide and let the wheel choose.
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No. 145453 ID: f067bc
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145453

The bird points towards Whipsalot, while the majority of the other bunnies respond with disappointment.

Whipsalot: "I feel so honored that you picked me out of all the other enforcers. I only hope that my way of stimulation will go along with your pain tolerance. Now follow me to my room, and there we can start."
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No. 145454 ID: f067bc
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145454

The bird followed Whipsalot to the room, and there she was instructed to put shackles over all her limbs. The bird did as she was told, but her body was put in an unpleasant position.
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No. 145455 ID: f067bc
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145455

Whipsalot: "I apologize for the discomfort, it is merely to keep you from moving to that I don't end up hitting you in the head."
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No. 145456 ID: f067bc
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145456

Whipsalot: "I know that all of this seems scary, but don't worry. I will guide you through it, just relax and think of pleasant things."
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No. 145457 ID: f067bc
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145457

Whipsalot: "I will start with simple lashes and add more and more intensity with every additional swing. This will get your body accustomed to the whip before I start with the real interaction."

The bird nods in agreement.
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No. 145458 ID: f067bc
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145458

Whipsalot: "Alright then, here we go. I know that you will be able to handle this."
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No. 145459 ID: f067bc
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145459

Whipsalot gives her first wipe strike, and the birds react with shock. As the additional whips come along, she reacts less shocked to them.
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No. 145460 ID: f067bc
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145460

The bird started to feel more fear in the anticipation of additional swings and the anticipation of more to cum.
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No. 145461 ID: f067bc
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145461

After a couple of them, the bird started to get more into the rhythm of it. Instead of finching after each strike, she started positioning her body for a better angle.
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No. 145462 ID: f067bc
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145462

All of this excitement continues until the body was no longer able to handle it.
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No. 145463 ID: f067bc
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145463

Whipsalot: "Oh, what a mess I make out of you."
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No. 145464 ID: f067bc
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145464

Whipsalot: "No need to close your legs, there is nothing to be ashamed of it, this is just your body reaching its limit. In fact, open them up and let me kiss you to make it feel better."
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No. 145465 ID: f067bc
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145465

The bird did as she was instructed, and as the Whipsalot started licking, she felt such a different pleasure compared to the previous version of it.
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No. 145466 ID: f067bc
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145466

Whipsalot and the bird officially finished their interaction and were resting after the ordeal.
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No. 145468 ID: f067bc
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145468

Whipsalot: "You might seem scared and confused, but there is more to you. While I was giving you the whipping, you didn't make a single sound. You have tenacity and endurance. You can accomplish anything that you put your mind to. We don't usually do this, but we can make you an honorary enforcer. But that is if you want to be that in the first place."
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No. 145469 ID: f067bc
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145469

Whipsalot: "No matter what you decide about my offer, I just want to say that I hope you got what you were looking for coming here and interacting with all of us."




This last offer is just not a way for me to implement your character into my story, but more of a what-if scenario. Like, how would Charlotte fight if she were an opponent from my NSFW story? What would be her weapon, and what kink would be attached to it? What would be her weakness and the other stuff? If you want, just describe her, and I will draw how she would look. But as mentioned, that is if you are up for it.
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No. 145471 ID: 89884f

>>145469
This whole thing was really nice of you dude, I'll be sure to pay it back somehow...and update my own Quest again.

>Sex Combat Charlotte
I imagine she'd be more of a magic user than physical despite her usual weapon being a magic crowbar. She'd probably have some sort of leather/latex straitjacket look and use rubber and leather or belts to incapacitate opponents. She'd be pretty BDSM oriented even if she wouldn't admit it.

>Weaknesses
Very sensitive and easy to overstimulate, if someone got close enough to mess with her or give her a taste of her own medicine she'd struggle to keep going pretty fast.
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No. 145472 ID: d9c2f9
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145472

Here is what I came up with. She would fight like Rope Bunny with the whole attempt to ensnare her opponent, but with straitjackets instead of ropes. And she would have a familiar face as an invisible helper. The last thing that I will draw in this what-if scenario is what you would like to see more of: Charlotte besting Hanako in combat, or Charlotte getting defeated by Hanako. Whatever scenario you pick, a description of how things played out will give me more to work with.
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No. 145481 ID: 0d054e

>>145472
This is actually really fucking rad dude, I especially love how you added Jabbering Sarcasm onto her like a Jojo Stand. I'm glad that hanging out with the rabbits gave her the confidence to dress more wild and really express herself.

In terms of a fight with Hanako, I think Charlotte would want to repay her rabbit friends after they were so nice to her and going after the rabbit who humiliated all of them seems like the best way to do it. She'd likely try to keep Hanako's attention with the belts and her crowbar staff while Sarcasm waits to do a sneak attack and bully her with those phantom hands. Considering her own weakness is getting overwhelmed I think it'd be ironic for her main strategy to be overwhelming Hanako from both sides before subduing her and claiming her as a pet. She'd make sure to share with the rabbits though, she mostly did it for them.
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No. 145483 ID: db4975
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145483

Alright, this is how I envisioned the battle between Charlotte and Hanako. In this what-if scenario, when Hanako was about to fight Lady Buttania, the bird would interfere and offer herself as the first opponent. Mint would be confused, but Whipsalot explained that the bird was an honorary enforcer, so Mint agreed and allowed this newbie to get obliterated in this fight against the Fox Headhunter.
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No. 145484 ID: db4975
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145484

Hanako would be confused by this newcomer and try to discourage her from participating in this fight. To Hanako, the bird looked like a nice person who got involved with some bad bunnies. But the bird would say that the fight is happening no matter what she said, and then she started an annoying laugh. This was the birds' strategy was, to present herself as an arrogant person.
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No. 145485 ID: db4975
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145485

To sell the act, she even started to twirl her red staff and drop it on purpose, but portrayed it as if she did it by accident. This worked out, and Hanako lowered her guard. To Hanako, the bird looked like somebody who got over her head, so she decided to go easy on her, not wanting this to last any longer than it needed to.
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No. 145486 ID: db4975
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145486

The bird used the opportunity to her advantage. Her invisible helper approached Hanako from behind, and in the blink of an eye, Hanako was ensnared in the straitjacket corset binding. Hanako was completely caught off guard.
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No. 145487 ID: db4975
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145487

The invisible helper started pulling on the strings of the straitjacket corset as hard as it could.
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No. 145488 ID: db4975
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145488

The straitjacket corset started to tighten around Hanako's body. She started to squirm, but the more she was moving more pressure she started feeling all over her body.
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No. 145489 ID: db4975
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145489

To add salt to the wound, the bird picked up the dildo dagger that Hanako dropped, and she proceeded to use it on her imprisoned opponent.
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No. 145490 ID: db4975
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145490

Hanako was trying to endure as much as she could, but she was in a really bad position. To her, it felt like she was fighting against two opponents at once, and they were relentless in their attacks.
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No. 145491 ID: db4975
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145491

Hanako lost the ability to stand, and she collapsed to the ground. Well, at least now the invisible helper was no longer pulling her strings, and Hanako was hoping to catch her breath. She almost fainted from the intense pressure of the straitjacket corset.
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No. 145492 ID: db4975
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145492

But the bird was not willing to give her opponent the opportunity to get up and continue to fight, so she lay on top of Hanako and proceeded to use the dildo dagger to ensure that Hanako was beaten once and for all. The body of her opponent reached its limit, and she was surrendering, she was no longer in any state to continue fighting.
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No. 145493 ID: db4975
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The bird put a leash on Hanako. To her, she was just a little pet one she earned to keep and share with others.
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No. 145494 ID: db4975
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One last sigh of humiliation, the bird presented the defeated body of Hanako to the rest of people in this room. The rest of enforcers bunnies gave a roaring applause to the bird. Whipsalot asked Mint if the honorary enforcer had become a real member of their group. Mint agreed and asked the bird how sould she should be called.



Pick the name for the birds' enforcer persona and how she will celebrate her new achievement. If you want, I can also change her appearance as well to signify her new position.
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